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Kawaii Naruto Shogakko Chpt 1 by ~DeiDei-San:iconDeiDei-San:



Kawaii Naruto Shôgakkô
Chapter 1
A True Love Ends


“Naruto-Kun!”
“Sasuke-Kun!”
“…”
“…”

Sakura and Hinata, one of the closest friends ever, sat down together at lunch. “So! Sakura, how are you and Sasuke-Kun? Everything going… Steady?” Hinata said, biting on a piece of chip. Sakura looked down at her plate of food. On her plate were a sandwich and an apple, along with a small carton of milk.
“Well… Not really. I mean it seems he’s… ignoring me. I don’t know why.”
“Same here with Naruto! I wonder what’s up with them.”
Sakura sighed. Sasuke was all she could think about… And now, he’s ignoring her. Hinata is the same way with Naruto, apparently.
“How could you sound so happy when someone’s ignoring you?!” Sakura said angrily, staring at her best friend.
“Your feelings are not all about that. You may be sad, but don’t let that feeling take control. Let it loose, and you will feel different. Just chill with the results!” Hinata said, smiling, and now is staring into the distance. “You really shouldn’t worry about it!”
“Oh. I see.”



“Argh! Pein-Sama! Why did you do that?!” Konan said, leaning over Pein on his shoulder.
“I just had to, Ko-Ko! I just had Sasori and Deidara get back together. Look at them, before! Think about it.”
Konan stared at the two, Sasori and Deidara. Deidara was laughing, and Sasori punching on his puppet jokes.
“Oh, Danna! You’re so funny!” Deidara said, laughing ‘her’ ass off.
“Hehe, well thank you.” Sasori said, leaning over Deidara giving ‘her’ a kiss on the cheek.
“Danna…” Deidara said, looking up at Sasori blushing.
Sasori smiled. “You’re such a shweet little girl!”
Deidara laughed, smiling angrily. “You b*****d!”
“Hmm… I guess so.” Konan said, sighing and staring at Pein. She then stared back at Sasori and Deidara. Sasori kissed Deidara again, this time on the lips. You could tell Deidara was very pleased.
“And since when did we do that? Never!” Konan said, angrily.
“Yes, I suppose. But, I thought you said you weren’t ‘ready’. You said I was ‘too wild’ to be kissing with. Let alone in bed…”
Konan blushed. “I was too ready! What are you talking about?!”
“What am I talking about? You’re the one who said it!”
“I did not!” Konan said, leaving Pein.
Deidara couldn’t help but notice. She ran towards the tearing blue haired Akatsuki princess. “Wah! What is wrong, Konan-Hime, UN?!”
Konan stopped in front of Deidara. “Pein… He just doesn’t understand! I… I hate Pein! We never have any time together like you and Sasori do! I see you guys’ together everyday now, Pein helping you guys getting back together. But while he’s doing that, he doesn’t bother to help our relationship that is separating! I don’t know what is happening, anymore! We used to go out together all the time like we did in Middle School! But now…”
Deidara laughed. “You’re losing it, Hime! He’s been pretty busy, and all he is trying to do is help me and Sasori, but he knows he’s still with you. Haven’t you noticed? If he really wanted to separate, he would have done it already, now wouldn’t he?”
Konan smiled a little bit. Deidara is her best friend after all, and Deidara always helps her in crises like this. “Well, I guess. But how can you still be cheerful when Sasori wasn’t with you?”
“Well I guess… You just have to let that sad feeling go away, and let the real you take control.”
“Oh. Thank you… Deidara.”
Deidara cracked a smile. She was wearing a kimono, and it glittered in the sunlight as she smiled. “That is what friends are for… Right?”
“Yes. Yes.” Konan smiled. “Of course. And I will always be there for you, too.”


“Naruto!!!” Hinata called to Naruto. Hinata was wearing a bluish kimono, and Naruto was wearing one for a male.
“Hinata!” Naruto smiled, hugging Hinata.
Hinata smiled, and in the distance, you would see Sakura… Crying.
“I guess nothing was wrong with them. But Sasuke…” Sakura cried, letting her hair fall down as she stared at the rocks below her. She was sitting on a chair, wishing. “I wish-“
“Sakura!” Sasuke called, as he came running towards the crying pink haired girl. “Are you ready?”
“Sasuke?” Sakura said in surprise. She stared at Sasuke who was also wearing a male Kimono. “What do you mean-“
“We planned to go on a date today, right?”
“Um, Well-“
“Let’s go, then!” Sasuke said, smiling and taking hold of Sakura’s hand and pulling her off the chair, as her hair sailed behind her.
“But Sasuke-Kun--!”
“We better hurry to the carnival before Naruto and Hinata get there before us!”
‘Carnival! That’s right… I wanted to go to the last Carnival this year with Sasuke-Kun!’ Sakura thought.
“Something wrong?”
“No, not at all-“
“SASUKE-KUN!!!” Ino said, jumping on Sasuke’s back, letting Sakura go.
“Augh! What do you want from me?!” Sasuke said, pulling off Ino, throwing her to the ground.
“To be my boyfriend!” Ino huffed.
“No way!” Sakura said, glaring at Ino. “Sasuke is MY BOYFRIEND! AND will NEVER EVER be YOURS! YOU GOT THAT?!”
“And how do you know that? Sasuke kissed me before! Isn’t that right, Sasuke?”
Sasuke stared at Ino. He blushed a tiny bit, but then he got angry, but still staring at surprise.
“That is right, Sasuke?” Ino smiled evilly.
Sakura put her hands to her chest and blushed sadly. “Is that true… Sasuke-Kun?”
Sasuke turned around so he wouldn’t look at Sakura.
“That’s not true right? Look at me!” Sakura cried.
Sasuke still didn’t budge to look back. He cried a drop. “Sasuke… Why? I thought you…”
“HA! See now, Sakura? Sasuke’s been seeing me this whole
time! He never liked you!” Ino laughed. “What a joke!”
Sasuke got angry, clenching his fists. “That’s not true! I love Sakura! That kiss was when we were never together before!”
“But you said-“
“I didn’t say anything! SO don’t mess with Sakura!” Sasuke said. Sasuke pulled Sakura’s arm and walked together to the carnival.
“Sasuke!” Ino cried. “Sasuke! Come back!”
Sasuke didn’t turn back. This time now, he put his shoulder around Sakura.
“Sasuke… I’m sorry.”


“It’s beautiful! The sight up here, right Naruto-Kun?” Hinata said, smiling. She noticed Naruto just sat there, on the chair, angry. “Naruto…”
“It’s not my fault. I didn’t mean to hurt her. I didn’t mean to…”
“Hurt who?”
“I didn’t mean to hurt Hanabi earlier today! I’m sorry! I just…”
“What…?!”
©2008-2009 ~DeiDei-San
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Author's Comments

Yay! Finally got Chapter One done... Now, I know I didn't explain much about anything in here, so I'll introduce the characters, and the next chapter, and story line

Sakura Haruno : The Girlfriend of Popular Guy Sasuke Uchiha. She is Hinata's Best Friend, and Ino's Rival. She goes to Sarutobi Elem School, as most of the other Characters do, except Akatsuki. She is 11 years old, and is in 5th Grade.

Sasuke Uchiha : The Great Itachi Uchiha's little brother, who also attends Sarutobi Elem with Sakura. He is also 11 years, and in the Fifth Grade. He is Naruto's best friend, and is a rival to Obito Uchiha.

Naruto Uzumaki : The Fourth Hokage's Son, and Hinata's Boyfriend. He is 11, in fifth grade, and is rival to Sasuke at the same time best buds. He is one of the best in the class, Sasuke ranking second. Now isn't that a change, perhaps? Also Attends Sarutobi Elem.

Hinata Hyuga : One of the best Hyuga, she is 11, in fifth grade, attends Sarutobi, and is calm, shy, quiet, sometimes bad tempered. Rivals to Neji Hyuga. Who is dead.

Akatsuki --

Pein: Leader of a popular group at Sarutobi High School. Named it Akatsuki, with the help of his best bud Madara Uchiha. Pein is the Boyfriend of Konan. He is 15 years, freshman. Other Best Bud is Kakuzu. Sometimes, Pein just wants to kick Kakuzu's ass. But he's dead already.

Konan: Girlfriend of Pein. Co-Leader of Akatsuki. 15, freshman, and best bud is Deidara. She hates Madara. She is the 'bully' at school. She really wants to kick people's asses.

Deidara:GIRL. GIRL. GIRL. No, Deidara is not actually a girl in the real Naruto. Deidara is actually a MALE, but in my FF, girl. HER boyfriend is Sasori, who recently got backed together with the help of Pein. 15, freshman. She's so good at art, she's famous at Sarutobi High, and ranked the most beautiful girl of all time.

Sasori: The hottest guy on campus. Boyfriend of Deidara, and glad to be. 15, freshman, and also famous. SO good at puppets, he's a real lady charmer. EVen tho the girls don't like puppets.

Madara: Calm guy. 18, and is a senior. Hates Itachi's Guts.

Itachi: Calm, violent sexy guy. Likes to charm the girls, and is ranked behind Sasori in the ladies 'Hottest Guys List'. 15, freshman. Best Bud is... NOT kisame. Deidara, actually.

Kakuzu, Hidan, Zetsu, Tobi: Moved to... Vietnam. They will be back soon... They have some 'business' there.

Kisame: Married, and has a job. Married to who... a fish... currently lives in Canada.
Obito uchiha : Calm, cute guy. 14, freshman at Sarutobi High.

NEXT CHAPTER : Sasuke gets hold of the memories with Ino, and now he is with Sakura. WHo will he choose? Naruto gets into a bad case with Hinata's little sister- Did Hinata know that Naruto has been beating up Hanabi? Konan and Pein- Will they stay together?

Story Line:

Love at Sarutobi Elem and High are getting serious, mixed up and out of order! Will they stop the mysteries behind their partner, and still battle the evil outside of school as NINJAS?!

Naruto Uzumaki is still wanting to become the Hokage. (Of Course!!). Sasuke doesn't leave, Karin, Suigetsu, that other guy, do not exist... Orochimaru won't show up. Sasuke and Sakura are together, So is Naruto and Hinata... Deidara, though... Yeah... Sasori... Haha!

So basically, The Naruto characters live a school life, same school, live in dorms. But when school is out, they're ninjas, of course! They disguise themselves so no one will no it is them that go to Sarutobi Elem. School. And when they come back, they live their lives, again...XD And of course they do Silly Missions Minato-Kun makes them!

EDIT: Hello! I decided to change a few things with some of the Akatsuki Hidan, Kisame etc. to the help of :iconsumgui:!!

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You don't like the ones you killed of do you? How childish.

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I actually like the entire Akatsuki Clan. And how would you know if i didn't like them just because of what I said? The only reason why i made them 'dead' was because I didn't want it to make the story to long with so much characters. but maybe later, i was thinking to bring them back in the story.
And how is that childish?

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Insted of making them dead, send them some place that will keep them out of the plot. Say Hidan, Zetsu, and Kakuzu moved or went on a long trip. You don't need to kill them off. It's more appealing then killing them.

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I think I might just do that. Never really thought about that... i was in a bit of a rush to know what to do with them... I was thinking something like that, but I was like 'Maybe I won't even put them in the story ^^;' Thanks btw =)

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You're welcome. It's a good story so far.NaruHina and SasuSaku! w00t!!

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=) Thank you! Let's hope they'll stay NaruHina and SasuSaku lol It might be SasuIno :o Who knows... I didn't think about the next page yet..

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woah! omg! I love it! next chapter!!

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PLEASE CONTINUE!!!!!! XD!!!!!! MUST READ!!!!
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lol XD thank you!!

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Thank you, cat!! :glomp:
I shall!

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